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baby. You’ll go check on the baby. You can’t remember if they told you if it’s
a boy or a girl. Why is it getting hard to remember things? The hum is louder
upstairs. Which room is the baby in? The first two doors open to empty
darkness. You go on, clinging to the anticipation of baby warmth, little body
curled in sleep, blanket-sleepered bottom in the air.
Finally,
a room with a night light. A crib stands in the center, a little mound under
the blanket. But the room is frigid, the crib rail like ice under your fingers.
The hum is so loud you can feel it in your chest. You turn down the blanket to
find a pillow underneath. And beneath the pillow . . . there is no baby. Just a
few large bones.
You
tear down the stairs, beginning to sob. A phone! You grab one of those red
phones. You’ll call 911 and then run out the door as fast as you can. You put
the receiver to your ear, but instead of a dial tone, a voice speaks, deeply
pleased and chilling: “I’ve been waiting for you.”
the phrase "deeply pleased and chilling" made me shiver.
ReplyDeleteYes, the "deeply pleased" makes it much more chilling.
DeleteI'm over the character limit with this one, but the alternative—saving the last paragraph for tomorrow—had a couple of disadvantages.
ReplyDeleteChilling.
ReplyDeleteDid she make soup with the bones? That would warm her up.
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