Tuesday, October 2, 2018

2/ Halloween Story, Part II

Thinking about a snack, you head for the kitchen. The refrigerator is stainless steel, huge, expensive, and empty. One small glass jar sits on a shelf, its contents black and forbidding. The rest of the fridge is bare. What do these people eat? you wonder. And how do they afford all this? What do they do?

You realize how little you know about the couple who hired you. When they called, you were grateful for something to do. Your parents were out at a Halloween party, and didn’t want you trick-or-treating because you were getting over a cold. Tonight’s temperature had dropped down to 22 degrees. The woman on the phone said her name was Eva somebody—Brown, maybe?—and her neighbor had given her your name. She didn’t say which neighbor. She didn’t mind that you had a cold.


13 comments:

  1. OK, I'm popping corn and settling in for a long, creepy tale!

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  2. Please don't tell me the kids (or what remains of them) are in that glass jar in the fridge.

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    1. Not to worry, Helen . . .

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    2. Go ahead and freak Helen out. It's her topic, after all.

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    3. Oh, that's true, IB. I may have to do a rewrite.

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  3. I love the nature of these serial stories - the comments become part of the whole experience!

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  4. The reason I asked about the kids is because in my (true) babysitting story I completely forgot the kids.

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  5. Sigh - dang fahrenheiters. I have to go look up how cold 22 is.

    Okay, I'm back. It's -5. Brrr!

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