The
house had seemed so stunningly sophisticated when you first arrived, with its
vast spaces, tall white walls and acres of black carpeting. But now, like
everything else about this babysitting experience, the house is just so
uncomfortably unfamiliar. And noisy! At first you blamed the scratching sounds
on trees—it had to be branches scraping against the windows—but later you
remember no trees surround this house on top of a bare hill.
And
now the hum. A threatening hum, as if too much electricity coursed through the
house. It’s beginning to drive you nuts. You need a TV on—any channel—or a stereo,
but you don’t see either downstairs. They don’t watch TV, you think, but they
must like to talk on the phone. In the living room sit four old-fashioned
looking phones, red ones, with the dial on the base.
Oh, I'm going to enjoy this. Curious--are you writing this "on the fly"?
ReplyDeleteI wish! No, I wrote this a long time ago, along with a couple of other very short stories on unsettling topics. I hope I can find the others, as this seems the perfect use for them.
DeleteI have a true babysitting story I will post sometime this month. Looking forward to reading the next entry.
ReplyDeletePoltergeist-y!
ReplyDeleteFor a minute, I thought it was my house being featured in the first paragraph!
ReplyDeleteYay! And since I'm starting so late, I won't have to wait for the next installment.
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